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Monday, 23 September 2019

house rat

House Rat
House rat run 
Rat cut 
Rat eat rat
Big rat little rat 
Hat rat run
Cat eat rat
Sat rat happy rat cat rat
Run   
Eat hat rat run cat fat cat
Little cat
Run cat eat 

rat.

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2 comments:

  1. Vicki31 October 2019 at 11:27

    Hi Charm,
    We are Room 12 at Waitohu School. We liked your poem, it was fun to read and a bit of a tongue twister. It reminds us of a Dr Seuss poem. Perhaps you could use some different words in your poem which might make it a little less tongue twisty. Why did you write a poem about a House Rat?
    We look forward to seeing more of your work.
    From Room 12

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  2. Anonymous7 November 2019 at 14:13

    Hi Charm
    Ethan in your class I love the humour. It is crazy.I can not wait for a other one!!! 😁😂😂😂

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